Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Antonio Does BDSM ( Part 1 now with FANCY!)

* I have loads of friends on the Twitter, and many of them are writers. @AntonioAngelo21 is one such friend and I challenged him (he challenged himself, really) to write a piece of BDSM Flash fic. It started out on twitter in tweet-form, but quickly got out of hand. Here it is, as it was given to me. If you enjoy it, go tell him.( Anyplace it says "the tall one" was where he had my twitter handle in the tweet version. I'm not very creative tonight :P)   * ** So Antonio wasn't happy with the missing bits or the 'translation from Twitterese  so he hit it again. But now it's Loooooooooooong. So I'm posting PART 1 today and I'll post Part 2 on Friday ***


He had been in control as long as he could remember, it was just who he was the first born son of strict parents, he was expected to care for and guide his siblings. Success was never praised in his family just expected; he had led his high school team to the state championship not as a pretty boy quarterback but as a linebacker. His natural abilities weren’t up to the standards of college athletics but he made the team on heart and guts taking the starting position his sophomore year and never relinquishing it until graduation. This same attitude had gone into his MBA he came out of college as a financial planner, now at 39 he had his own firm, a recent divorce and an overpriced therapist telling him he needed to let go of his controlling nature a little.

What the fuck did she know, being weak had never solved anything, giving up control wasn’t a strength it was a weakness. Giving up control is what lesser people did, real men handled their shit. What exactly could he let go of? Should he just let his business fail, maybe he should stop working out and get fat. 250 dollars a session and her suggestion was “just let go, you don’t have to control everything.”

How the fuck did she think he paid her fee. He wasn’t some trust fund kid working out mommy issues. He earned his money precisely by not letting go and letting things happen. He knew what happened when people let go. They began to fall and falling wasn’t what he wanted. He wanted happiness, he had cars, he had money, he had homes, he went to her because he felt he could be happier and not having time to go climb a mountain or do whatever it was most people did to get happy he felt five 250 dollar half hour sessions might just help him achieve that elusive thing that made others grin like idiots, when their lives were no where near as fruitful as his had been.

It wasn’t the money that nagged at him, it was the fact that he had paid for advice that turned out to be so against everything he believed. But he wasn’t one to simply give up and walk away. He was in fact unhappy and if he was going to beat this unhappiness logic told him he had to try something different. So maybe there was something to giving up control and that is why he found himself standing in front of Black Box.

The music emitting from inside sounded like some kind of punk rock techno mix. Definitely not the easy going Jimmy Buffet vibe he would normally seek out from some sea side tourist trap in his normal yearly attempt at pretending to relax. No this place was dark, the guy at the door had things all over his face, metal, plastic god knows what, he looked like his face had been hit by a shrapnel bomb metal studs everywhere, pale as death just to complete the illusion. The therapist had actually recommended this place as a way to leave his comfort zone, and well she was right about that he was out of his element. Cover charge paid and he stepped into a new world. One where black was apparently the color of choice, his Silver Suit and white shirt looked positively pastel when compared to the leather, and dark lace that seemed to be most favored by the Black Box Patrons.


At the bar a tall leggy dark haired girl with a streak of blue caught his attention. Her body was tone, something he appreciated but the nose ring and stud in her lip seemed a bit much. She was talking to an adorable little thing with an exaggerated pony tail of deep black, contrasting beautifully against her powder white skin, a dark plaid mini skirt, and white blouse, kind of a school girl type vibe but the fishnet panty hose sexed it up to the tenth degree.

The girls seemed to be checking out some of the males in the establishment, despite putting on a decidedly hot for each other vibe. The men were of the variety that probably played base in a band and worked at subway during the week to pay their rent. Either that or they were taking a break from the Occupy the sidewalk movement. There were a few harder to peg, definitely putting on the air of bad ass and probably could back it up. But he wasn’t here for the men, so they faded into the back ground quickly as he concentrated on the two ladies close to the bar.

The tall table against the wall at least let him feel like he was out of the way. Most of the looks he was receiving were somewhat disapproving but that wasn’t exactly unexpected. He had kind of chosen his suit as a fuck you, he knew somewhere named the Black Box would be occupied by occupiers and his suit emphatically said “yes I do conform to capitalist ideals and have no problem using more than my share of resources.” The beer was a little flat, and the glass wasn’t exactly clean, at first he wondered if that was intentional but other glasses nearby confirmed that it was par for the course.

He stared across the bar from his little table at the pixie cut with the blue streak. She didn’t seem to smile a whole lot, and looked increasingly uncomfortable at his long gaze. The little one with her was a bit more playful looking over from time to time and smiling frequently. It wasn’t until he returned the little ones smile that the taller one took notice. She began a hard stare of her own, ice blue eyes caught his attention as she refused to back down from his glance. His smile was not returned and he tried a disarming shrug to no avail. This one was tough, was she jealous of his glances at her girlfriend, maybe she really was a dyke, well if she was, she was a beautiful one that is for sure. He looked down into his beer now half gone. Reaching into his pocket he pulled out a cigarette and lit it leaning back as if to say, I am going to watch all night pretty lady I don’t care how nasty your looks get.

Through the haze of incinerated tobacco, he began to wonder if there really was a possible end game to this stand off. The girls hadn’t exactly given him the cold shoulder the short cute one most definitely had interest in men, and had paid particular attention to him since he had begun his vigil. The taller one was closer to his normal pursuits other than the blue streak in her hair and the jewelry in her face. The fact that she wouldn’t give up so much as a smile drew his interest. And the way she had interrupted his flirtations with the smaller one by pulling her pony tail and then engaging her in a deep kiss had certainly gained his attention. Fuck giving up control, what he needed was a lay and although he wasn’t sure how this would play out he was fairly confident there was one in there somewhere.

The silver suit flashed as the handsome stranger, stood up, who was this guy so proud of himself sitting and staring for a half an hour. It hadn’t chased him off when she had stared him down and he hadn’t even flinched when she began kissing Tiffany. Maybe he was a player, the guy looked like a top and Lela had little use for a top. She had just gotten away from Jerry and that fucking asshole had abused the fuck out of her submission. No, if this guy was a top he could keep walking Lela wanted control she had Tiffany, sweet little Tiffany so adoring and submissive, but she also needed dick, this guy seemed attracted to Tiffany surely he would fuck her, but would he have anything left to fuck me and would he do it right or would he just be so overwhelmed at being under the thumb of a dominatrix that he would falter and go limp.

“Do you girls come here often?” His confident smile couldn’t coat the cringe worthiness of the line.
“Obviously you don’t” Answered Lela the tall one.

“What I mean is can I buy you ladies a drink?”

“Vodka Martini for me, Grey Goose, and something sweet for Tiffany.”

“Tiffany, I love that name.” Again, awkward silence. But Tiffany did wrap a little hair around her finger and smile at least.

“Nice Dog Collar, Tiffany.” He tried one more time.

“She is with me Armani, are you in the life?” The blue eyed girl stared sharing the first hint of a smile.

“The Life?”

“You know tops, bottoms, dungeons, whips, cuffs?”

He glanced over at the dog collar around Tiffanies throat. “Are you serious?”

“Looks like we have a virgin, Pet, are you looking for a new chew toy?” To this the pony tail bounced up and down in an enthusiastic nod.

“I am not a virgin.” He was trying to demonstrate confidence that was faltering just a touch.

“It’s nothing to be ashamed of everyone has to start somewhere, Armani.” Said the blue eyed beauty most definitely showing a little interest now that she sensed advantage.

Tiffany or Pet as Lela referred to her Nodded again as Lela produced a collar from a black leather studded over sized purse. At first he didn’t notice the collar as he was admiring the tone in Lela’s legs. Her thighs had strength probably a swimmer or maybe a lot of hours on an elliptical, the black pants were skin tight and tucked into leather boots that ended just above her knee.

“Do you consent” she whispered as she leaned in close enough that he was able to breathe in a scent somewhere between rose and leather unfamiliar to him as a perfume yet enticing.

“Consent to what?” Sounding a little harsher than he intended.

“To giving me complete control of everything for the next few hours.” This time her smile was pronounced, impish, inviting.

“Maybe?” He said, eyebrows raised.

“That is not good enough, Armani, the answer is yes.” She said putting her knee into his thigh and applying a little discomfort to him gritting her smile away.

“Yes.” He said, mulling over the juicy possibility of far more than a knee pressing against him.

The yes had barely left his lip when he found himself collared the blue eyes inches from his face, her forearms against his chest delicate hands stroking his hair.

“Do you want a kiss?” She asked her pleasant breath traveling over his lips, as her eyes scanned his face.

“I do.” He said with a cocksure smile.

Lela nodded toward Tiffany as she backed away. “Pet, the man wants a kiss.”

Tiffanies hand travelled across his belt line, her nose nuzzled in his collar He maintained eye contact with Lela even as the pony tail tickled his nose.

“Give her attention slave, she has earned it.” Tiffany moved her body against his she was warm and soft her hand traveled lightly across his chest, and he did recognize this scent it was Poison by Christian Dior. Lela pulled the chain on his collar dipping his head down, his mouth watered at the first taste of flesh gentle nibbles on the back of Tiffanies neck just above her collar.

“Be gentle on her, She doesn’t deserve to hurt yet, come with me pets, there will be time enough to get to know each other later. Armani you should clear your tab. We are going to my place.”

“My name is…” The slap completely took him by surprise.

“Your name is Armani, if I am feeling sweet or slave if you piss me off, but beyond that you have no name.”

The walk was unusual to say the least, ahead of him pulling a leash was Lela, beside him also on a leash was Tiffany bouncing along and smiling, snuggling she seemed as comfortable as if they had been high school sweet hearts tucked under his arm pulling away playfully then returning her wandering hands joyfully exploring his torso. She really was a beautiful soul. Lela on the other hand was a bit of a concern, just how far was she willing to take this tough girl act? That thought was competing with Tiffanies breasts that were also bouncing wildly as she half skipped half walked keeping up with her long legged master and himself. The sudden tightening of the chain around his neck brought him back into focus.

“Do you have to pee slave?”

“Um no, not really?”

“Well this is where slaves and pets pee.” He glanced around realizing he was in some sort of alley.

“You mean by this tree?” As he said that he noticed Tiffany had pulled down her fishnets and hiked her skirt. Smiling as always she seemed perfectly content squatting and peeing right in front of him. The bush shielded her from anyone walking past the alley but he was close enough that he had to step aside to avoid a small stream of pee now running towards him.

“Maybe if you don’t have a bathroom, we should go to my place?” He said suddenly wondering what he had got himself into.

“I have a bathroom, it just isn’t for slaves, if you want to pee, you should get on with it.”

It wasn’t the first time he had ever pee’d outside but it was the first time he had ever done it on a leash. Zip… ahhhhh. Lela tugged his leash as he was shaking out the last few drops, Tiffany was giggling which caused him to look over and then he caught an evil glance from Lela. He was about to zip up when she pulled the leash very hard. Pet could you give the slave a hand with that.

Tiffany wrapped around from behind him, she searched for the zipper a little more searching than was probably necessary. But her hands were welcome. The zip came without excruciating pain which was a legitimate concern the way things were moving around in his pants. No sooner was he zipped than his leash was once again pulled taught and the little band was moving again.

Lela’s home was nicer than he had expected, more pier one than the Munsters, he made the mistake of sitting on the plush and springy tan couch and his ass probably hadn’t even found the bottom of the plushiness yet when the leash once again pulled tight and he found himself spread eagle upon the floor.

“Not on the couch slave, I had hoped you were at least house trained.”

The view was now beige carpet, pleasantly clean, a leather boot not quite as clean the leash was tight, under the soul notched by the heal. Her calf flexed and the leather hugged, the other boot rocked back and forth as did the leg leading to an ass wrapped in black, was it spandex no some kind of cotton, stretching over the ridges of an amazing body, there was the roundness of a beautiful ass, his eyes followed inside the thighs, there was another ridge, her pussy, it was there he couldn’t see it, not all of it but there was an outline and it moved as she swayed. There was sex in those pants, soft, sweet, womanly sex he could feel it even here the boot holding down his throat he longed to move up, but that wasn’t going to happen, not right now at least. He didn’t really understand the game yet, but he was learning. Be good and good things happened.

Tiffany had been in the kitchen apparently making drinks. The boot came off the chain. As Lela took a drink a little vodka splashed on the back of Armani’s head. As he got up on his hands and knees he felt a long slender finger running where the vodka had just splashed. He heard the smacking of lips, and looked up to see the same finger that had recently run along his head emerging from candy apple red lips, the smile lingered upon the lips until she caught his gaze and then he felt like his lung was about to collapse as that well fitting boot from earlier found a spot just at the base of his lowest rib.

The air rushed from his lips and spittle splattered across the carpet. He rolled to his side and laughed through the grimace. A boot came across his throat as he allowed himself to be rolled on to his back.

“evil willy” rolled off her lips.

“what?”

“Evil Willy, can you remember that?”

“Evil Willy, why would I need to remember that?”

“It’s the safe word, I should have told you earlier but we hadn’t done anything dangerous.”

“Safe word? What is a safe word?”

“If shit gets to rough for you, you scream Evil Willy”

“Sounds fair enough.”

“but if you yell it, you should know, the nights over, I don’t care how hard your dick is or how blue your balls, you mutter that and it’s game over, I kick your ass out, rub one out and go to bed. So if your pussy ass wants to cum, you better not mumble that damn word. Now what’s the safe word?”

‘Evil Willy.”
“Good you aren’t as dumb as you look. Now I don’t want to hear that again ok.”

“Yes Ma’am”

“Its mistress, you address me as Mistress.”

“Yes Mistress, and what should I call her.”

“What the fuck do I care what you call her, she’s a fucking pet.”

“So Pet then.”

“No asshole she is my pet, not yours. Call her Tiffany.”

“Ok Tiffany, that’s a nice name.”

“Yea she is real sweet, if you hurt her I will bust your fucking nuts and not in the good way.”

“Yes ma’am, Mistress, sorry Mistress.”

“Are there any rules you would like us to consider?”

“Rules like what?”

“Stuff like no scat, or stuff like you don’t want to be fucked in the ass”

“Scat, fucked in the ass? What is scat?”

“Never mind we are going to keep it pretty basic I think.”

“So um yea please don’t fuck me in the ass, in fact could you just leave that alone altogether?”

“Really, not even a little finger?” She said waiving her pinky.

“I’m just not real comfortable with that.”

“You’re not supposed to be comfortable.”

“Well I guess I can go to the safe word, if it gets out of hand”

“Stay the fuck away from that safe word, Armani.”

“Well then stay out of my ass.”


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